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Hello, I cannot find the revised version of this document that was reviewed in August 2013. If you're able to locate it would you kindly send it to me with the changes, please?

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Empowerment is an oft and repeated buzz word in this young millennium but it is a realistic word and term for this modern world.
asked Sep 25 '13 at 16:59 Sharon A Scott New member

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Patty TSep 25 '13 at 18:02

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I would not use 'an oft'. 'Oft' is an adverb but you have used it as a noun. Remove the 'and'. You need a comma after millennium. 'word' and 'term' are redundant. Drop one of them.

 

Empowerment is an oft repeated buzz word in this young millennium, but it is a realistic word for this modern world.

link comment answered Sep 27 '13 at 17:30 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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