Cannot find the revised version
Hello, I cannot find the revised version of this document that was reviewed in August 2013. If you're able to locate it would you kindly send it to me with the changes, please?
Empowerment is an oft and repeated buzz word in this young millennium but it is a realistic word and term for this modern world.
I would not use 'an oft'. 'Oft' is an adverb but you have used it as a noun. Remove the 'and'. You need a comma after millennium. 'word' and 'term' are redundant. Drop one of them.
Empowerment is an oft repeated buzz word in this young millennium, but it is a realistic word for this modern world.
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