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The article by Caitlin Kirkwood is based on the findings in the articles entitled 'Sucrose activates human taste pathways differently from artificial sweetener' (Frank G.K.W., Oberndorfer T.A., Simmons A.N., Paulus M.P., Fudge J.L., Yang T.T. & Kaye W.H. (2008), published in the Scientific Journal - NeuroImage and 'Altered processing of sweet taste in the brain of diet soda drinkers' (Green E. & Murphy C. (2012), published in the Scientific Journal - Physiology and Behavior.
asked Sep 25 '13 at 05:50 Manan Kohli New member

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