Indicate whether the sentence is correct or contains an unwarranted shift in person

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When one drives into the foothills of Appalachia, you are shocked by the poverty there.

asked Sep 24 '13 at 02:18 Nicholas New member

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You are writing in third person perspective at the beginning of the sentence. Then you switch to second person perspective. The entire sentence needs to be in the same perspective.

link comment answered Sep 24 '13 at 03:02 Patty T Grammarly Fellow
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"Of course Owen is right; I've forgotten my manners. I'm sorry Tessi love. I can only put it down to the long flight". Nora said.

link answered Sep 24 '13 at 17:22 Sharon Foote New member

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