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Learning the Art of Trading by Making Sense of Technical Analysis - other way of wording?  Too heavy?

asked Sep 20 '13 at 13:59 Anne Mullet New member

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This seems to be title of something because of the initial caps. If not, you need to make this a complete sentence by adding a verb. There are many ways to rewrite this, but it doesn't seem too heavy to me.

link comment answered Sep 20 '13 at 15:56 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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