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It was a sunny day and Little Max was having his dinosaur birthday party.

asked Sep 19 '13 at 19:42 Noel Jones New member

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This is a compound sentence, and you need a comma after day. If 'Little' is part of Max's name, keep it capitalized. If 'little' is just an adjective, it should be lower case.

 

It was a sunny day, and Little Max was having his dinosaur birthday party.

link comment answered Sep 19 '13 at 19:52 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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