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help with rephrThe shame experience tends to make us feel alone and outside society at the moment it happens, but it has to be acknowledged and dealt with.asing the sentence

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The shame experience tends to make us feel alone and outside society at the moment it happens, but it has to be acknowledged and dealt with.
asked Mar 14 '12 at 14:15 Shariza Baksh Ramroop New member

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Not sure what you're asking for.  The sentence, as it is written, is perfectly fine...  If you need help with rephrasing it, below is a suggestion.  However, you may want to avoid simply rephrasing a sentence.  That would be plaigiarism.

 

The moment of shame tends to make us feel alone and isolated from society, but it must be acknowledged and managed.

link comment answered Mar 14 '12 at 14:59 Erik Czerwin Contributor

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