Faulty paralleism

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I'm reallt suck how to modify this sentence... :(

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I continued pursuing this interest by facilitating 6th, 7th, and 8th grader's through the Future Scholars in 1995-1997 and taught preschool at CSUN from 1998 through 2001.
asked Mar 13 '12 at 01:54 Elena Shnayder New member

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I continued pursuing this interest by facilitating 6th, 7th, and 8th grader's through the Future Scholars in 1995-1997, and I taught preschool at CSUN from 1998 through 2001.

link answered Mar 14 '12 at 15:17 Erik Czerwin Contributor

Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much!!!!! Very helpful.

Elena ShnayderMar 15 '12 at 01:37

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