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As I mentioned you please find the list of not available beverage list attached. Some of the items not available last few month and I have remove them from the list. kindly check this matter and update accordingly

asked Sep 08 '13 at 17:16 susantha New member

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As I mentioned you earlier, please find the enclosed list of non- available beverages.  Some of the items that were unavailable for the last few months are removed from the list. Please check this matter and update accordingly.

link answered Sep 09 '13 at 08:29 Sanjay Expert

A couple of small issues: ...mentioned to you...

"Enclosed" and "attached" have different meanings and cannot be used interchangeably (e.g., "enclosed in an envelope" and "attached to an e-mail").

Joyce FSep 10 '13 at 11:45

ok thank you i am learning

susanthaSep 10 '13 at 12:05

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Please find attached the list of non-available beverages, as I mentioned to you. I have removed some of the items that were not available for the last few months, from this list. Please check this matter and update accordingly.

link edited Sep 10 '13 at 11:42 Joyce F Contributor

that's good joyce this will really help me

susanthaSep 10 '13 at 12:06

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