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How can i reword this sentence?Please advice

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An accomplished IT Project Manager with extensive consulting experience in application design, development, validation and implementation for Fortune 1000 Corporations including 5 Pharmaceutical companies.
asked Mar 12 '12 at 19:15 Rama Taraka New member

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Additionally, if it is a resume you don't need "I am".  If an employer is only going to spend 30 seconds reading a resume, the last thing he or she needs to see is the redundant I am, I was, I used to be, etc.  You are allowed to break the traditional every sentence needs a subject and a verb rule when writing a resume.

link comment answered Mar 12 '12 at 22:58 Jody M. Expert

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