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Being a part time student and a full time mother and wife can be stressful, but I continue because I want to influence my daughter, to never give up, despite the obstacles in life.
asked Sep 06 '13 at 16:11 genesis castillo New member

part- time and a full- time should be hyphenated.

SanjaySep 06 '13 at 16:14

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Sanjay is right: you'll need to hyphenate "part-time" and "full-time." Also, the second half of your sentence is a little confusing. I understand it to mean that "never give up, despite the obstacles in your life" is the lesson you want to teach your daughter, but after a quick read, it sounds like you're listing two things you want to do: to influence your daughter, and to never give up.

 

This will make it clearer:

 

Being a part-time student and a full-time mother and wife can be stressful, but I continue because I want to teach my daughter that she should never give up, despite the obstacles in life.

 

Hope that helps!

link comment answered Sep 06 '13 at 19:48 Actually Holly Expert
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yes teach hur to never give up in life no mather how hard it gerts never give up

link comment answered Sep 07 '13 at 01:46 donna New member

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