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Their behaviors and attitudes are unacceptable, therefore they need to change.
The three ways to join independent clauses:
(1) comma + coordinating conjunction
...are unacceptable, so they need...
(2) semicolon + conjunctive adverb + comma
...are unacceptable; therefore, they need...
...are unacceptable; they need...
You tried to commingle (1) and (2).
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