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Already in Spain, Liz and Maria, visited ( El Museo del Prado), and walked to see the beautiful architecture.

I will like to hear how the sentence above can sound better.

Thank you,

Ana

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Already in Spain, liz and Maria, visited ), and then went for a walk to see the beautiful architecture.

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Already in Spain, Liz and Maria, visited, and then went for a walk to see the beautiful architecture.

It's redundant, meaning repetitive. ;-) visited and then went for a walk? Unless you mean "visited with each other."

Try this: "Already in Spain, Liz and Maria chatted and then went for a walk to see the beautiful architecture."

or, slightly more concise: "Already in Spain, Liz and Maria met then walked to see the beautiful architecture."

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answered Mar 08 '12 at 01:56

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