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Need help on not using the passive voice?

See example:

This program is based on helping the college kicker on a budget.
asked Mar 05 '12 at 16:49 Shane Andrus New member

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The program helps the college kicker on a budget.

 

Revision makes the sentence active and removes unnecessary (and wordy) prepositions.

link comment answered Mar 10 '12 at 00:20 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow

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