help please?
Need help on not using the passive voice?
See example:
This program is based on helping the college kicker on a budget.
asked Mar 05 '12 at 16:49
Shane Andrus
New member
1 answer 
The program helps the college kicker on a budget.
Revision makes the sentence active and removes unnecessary (and wordy) prepositions.
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answered Mar 10 '12 at 00:20
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