How can rewrite the long sentence as below


Two significant contributions of this work are: 1) the exploitation of a semi-supervised feature extraction, called Semi-supervised Probabilistic Principal Component Analysis (S$^{2}$PPCA), which combines both the unlabeled and labeled information to extract reliable lower-dimensionality features; 2) the integration of spatial information using segmentation approaches, including partitional clustering based methods, Mean-shift and watershed transformation.

longsentence asked Aug 22 '13 at 08:50 Junshi New member

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Scientific or technical information often gets presented in such long sentences, and it isn't easy to avoid. You could break it down into three sentences. There are two contributions. The exploitation of blah blah combines blah blah. The integration of blah uses blah blah blah.

link comment answered Aug 22 '13 at 12:25 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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