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My dad, you see, does his good deeds by stealth.

Above all, he never advertises the fact that he has helped so many people in so many different ways.

I believe that almost everyone he knows has been at the receiving end of his kind blue eyes.

My dad adopted six kids including myself.

In 1990, at the age of two, I ran into my father’s strong arms and with this feeling of security that feeling has never wavered in my life.

When I asked my father, “Why did you adopt,” He answered in a husky voice, saying I wanted to help kids that did not have anything and improve their lives.

My Fathers broad shoulders seemed to carry the weight of the world on his shoulders.

It seems he lives life by the moment.

My Dad is everything I inspire to be as a man and a father, Strong willed kind and just willing to live life as it comes.

When I was a boy my dad would take me Fossil hunting at Devils Den Park.

When I found a fossil as a reward my father, and I would go down to the gift shop and have some Ice Cream 

B. It was times like that my father would remind me to enjoy life.

C. See something my father instilled in me as a child was not being too serious.

Yes, there may be times that require being serious but, you have one life to live and why not enjoy it while you can.

D. Also my dad would constantly says, do the best you can, and help others around you.

See example:

Yes, there may be times that require being serious but, you have one life to live and why not enjoy it while you can.
asked Feb 27 '12 at 20:10 rebecca holt New member

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