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asked Aug 15 '13 at 02:02 Yvette Cobbs New member

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I agree that it is incorrect, Yvette.  I'd like to be able to give you some direction to fix it, but I don't understand what you are attempting to communicate in this sentence.

link comment answered Aug 15 '13 at 04:45 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

Add a semi-colon after "dialogue."

link comment answered Aug 15 '13 at 22:34 AB72 New member

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