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Helping people is the path I chose to follow they satisfaction some how becomes my main goal. Also since my career involve d

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Helping people is the path I chose to follow they satisfaction some how becomes my main goal.

asked Feb 23 '12 at 03:51

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"Helping people is the path I chose to follow they satisfaction some how becomes my main goal."

Try this: I chose to follow the path of helping people, and their satisfaction is my main goal.

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answered Mar 03 '12 at 14:38

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