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Helping people is the path I chose to follow they satisfaction some how becomes my main goal. Also since my career involve d

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Helping people is the path I chose to follow they satisfaction some how becomes my main goal.
asked Feb 23 '12 at 03:51 Ian New member

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"Helping people is the path I chose to follow they satisfaction some how becomes my main goal." 

 

Try this: I chose to follow the path of helping people, and their satisfaction is my main goal. 

link comment answered Mar 03 '12 at 14:38 Raphael Workman New member

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