How can I make this a better Thesis statement?
Pregnancy can be a beautiful thing but if its not something that is desired by two it can turn into a handfull of stress which can cause a depression that is there to stay.
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Pregnancy can be a beautiful thing but if its not something that is desired by two it can turn into a hand full of stress which can cause a depression that is there to stay.
asked Feb 23 '12 at 02:46
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