Is the 2nd sentence OK? (I have a word count to meet).
God declared that Gideon’s army was too large and reduced it to 300 men.
God declared the army too large and reduced it to 300 men.
If using the second sentence, the subjet (Gideon's Army) would need to be idenfied in the preceding sentence. Otherwise, it would be unclear which army "God declared" to be too large. Is you word count that strict? Usually +/- 10% is acceptable for word limits.
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