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1.In the movie, and book that Brooke mother and Lazarus sister wanted to give up on Jesus. 2.God listen and calls on people prayers, he may not come when they want but he does answers people prayers 3. He showed the people and Lazarus sisters that he never lift their side and he was their the whole time. 4. In the movie Brooke and Gospel John it teaches people that everything does not come to you at once and when you want it. 5.In Gospel John Jesus taught the Israelites to have patience and to depend on God and he will always be there for you no matter what. 6.They believe everything will be ok if they believe and faith, that she would overcome her condition. 7.In Brooke Ellison movie and John Gospel it showed how the devil was very busy.  8.The school board told her mother that they were not going to pay for a nurse to take care of Brooke, and that she was not qualified to take care of her daughter. 9.When she returns to school the principal who was the main person trying to prevent her from returning to school was very stun when the other teacher started to help her mother bring her into the school building. 10.When Pilate had asked Jesus a question and Jesus just gave him the silence treatment.  11.Pilate gave the crowd what they wanted and that is was kill Jesus and belittle him.  12. In John Gospel when Jesus replied but to Pilate and basically said he does not have the power to take away or hold anyone life in his hands, that’s how silence was done. 13.In the workforce having a name that has a meaning to it means a significant value to them. 14. In African Borrowing Pot many people had made God the center focally point of their life that it seem that they couldn’t one day with hearing Gods name. 15.God listen and calls on people prayers, he may not come when they want but he does answers people prayers. 16.He showed the people and Lazarus sisters that he never lift their side and he was their the whole time. 17.They believe everything will be ok if they believe and faith, that she would overcome her condition.

asked Feb 20 '12 at 17:16 gerri New member

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Gerri, there are more errors here than just punctuation.  Item #1 on your list is not actually a sentence.  There are spelling errors, and issues with singular/plural or past/present agreement in other sentences.  It is difficult to address all of the issues here.  Perhaps your school could supply or recommend a tutor to help you with basic sentence structure, spelling, rules for punctuation, tense agreement, and other matters. 

 

This forum is listed by Grammarly as "Q&A in English Grammar & Usage".  While we can answer specific questions about grammar, we can't really teach you in depth here.  Nor can we do your homework for you.  Simply correcting your sentences does not help you to learn.

 

Can you ask a specific question about one sentence.  Then we can help you to better understand how to use the rules of grammar.  

link comment answered Feb 20 '12 at 18:39 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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