Talking about Education and the use of 'if'

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what is wrong with this sentence?

. This becomes clear when Albert Einstein pointed out that ‘ Education is that which remains when one has forgotten what one has learned in school’, making it look as if Education and schooling are at variance

asked Aug 06 '13 at 23:24 OMOGE ADEKANMI OLUMUYIWA New member

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It's a mouthful (and the punctuation is a bit screwy), but without rearranging the sentence I might prefer to say, "…making it look as though…" or more concisely, "…as though…". Also, to my ear it should be, "…Education and schooling were at variance."

link comment answered Aug 07 '13 at 19:37 Greg deJong Contributor

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