Is the punctuation correct?

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What I'm aiming for, is to be a man that he can still look up to, when he's a man.

punctuation asked Aug 06 '13 at 16:59 Nick New member

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There are punctuation as well as pronoun problems. I think a rewrite would serve you best. I'm assuming the 'he' in the sentence is your son, and you want him to look up to you even when he has grown up.

 

My goal is to be a man my son will look up to when he is a man.

link answered Aug 06 '13 at 17:17 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

I tried to edit this but it won't let me save my changes. I like this a little better.

My goal is to be the man my son will look up to when he becomes a man.

Lewis NeidhardtAug 06 '13 at 17:19

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