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During 1400 and 1500 the Italy was participating a key alter that take place in the entire feature of existence

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During 1400 and 1500 the Italy was participating a key alter that take place in the entire feature of existence.
asked Feb 15 '12 at 01:11 luk Riek New member

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Luk, this is not a question. What is it you want changed? 

There are problems with the sentence... 

 

  1. 'During' means throughout, so you would follow it with a specific (closed) time period, but not in the way you have done. Because you have specified the beginning and the end of the period, rather than just the period, you need to use the word 'between'. 
    You could write that sentence either: "During the 1400s..." or, "Between 1400 and 1500..."
  2. Italy is referred to as just "Italy", not "the Italy"
  3. "Italy was participating" is passive, you would probably be better to say "Italy participated in..." or "Italy was part of..."
  4. "a key alter that take place in the entire feature of existence" does not make sense. I suspect you mean something along the lines of, "an event that altered the entire future of existence," which is a very bold statement to make.

I hope that helps. Please rephrase your query to let us know what it is you are struggling with.

link comment answered Feb 15 '12 at 13:47 Siân Harris Expert

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