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Please help me correct this sentence:

 

With my eyes full with tears and with barely any force left in my body, I asked my mom "can we pray together?"

asked Aug 03 '13 at 21:59 Gladys Gouvea New member

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The only errors I see are there should be a comma after 'mom' and 'Can' should be capitalized. I would leave out the third 'with', but you don't have to.

 With my eyes full with tears and barely any force left in my body, I asked my mom, "Can we pray together?"

link comment answered Aug 03 '13 at 23:22 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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