Please help me correct this sentence:
With my eyes full with tears and with barely any force left in my body, I asked my mom "can we pray together?"
The only errors I see are there should be a comma after 'mom' and 'Can' should be capitalized. I would leave out the third 'with', but you don't have to.
With my eyes full with tears and barely any force left in my body, I asked my mom, "Can we pray together?"
|link comment||answered Aug 03 '13 at 23:22 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow|