Punctuation or seperate this into 2 sentences

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Punctuation or seperate this into 2 sentences

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Careful thought is given to the matriculation of students, the cultural needs represented around the location of the school, and the maximization of the specialized gifts and callings of the staff who have a heart for local and global ministry.
asked Feb 09 '12 at 20:29 Ctartt New member

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It should be 'punctuate' (verb, not noun) and 'sepArate'... and I think there was a 'please' missing too... but hey...

Careful thought is given to the matriculation of students and the cultural needs represented around the location of the school; the specialized gifts and callings of the staff, who have a heart for local and global ministry, must also be maximised.

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Careful thought is given to the matriculation of students and the cultural needs represented around the location of the school. The specialized gifts and callings of the staff, who have a heart for local and global ministry, must also be maximised.

link edited Feb 09 '12 at 20:41 Elvis Trundle Contributor

Thank you!! CtarttFeb 09 '12 at 21:05

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Adding "to" the cultural needs... Careful thought is given to the matriculation of students and to the cultural needs represented around the location of the school; the specialized gifts and callings of the staff, who have a heart for local and global ministry, must also be maximised.
link comment answered Feb 10 '12 at 22:39 Di Henderson New member

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