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How do I fix this sentence?

An official warned the hunter not to carry a rifle in a car that was loaded.

asked Feb 09 '12 at 18:08 Traci Carwana New member

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Well, the car isn't loaded, so...."an official warned the hunter not to carry a loaded rifle in the car."

link comment answered Feb 09 '12 at 18:16 Lindsey York Contributor

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