Passive voice

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How may I re-word the following sentence: "After the meeting’s minute of  April 4, 2013 was motioned and seconded by the attendees, the following decisions took place:"

asked Jul 30 '13 at 20:28 Maritza Mendoza New member

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To get rid of the passive voice, you must have the people doing the motioning, seconding, and deciding as the subject of the sentence.

 

The attendees of the meeting motioned and seconded the minutes of the April 4, 2013, meeting and made the following decisions:

link comment answered Jul 31 '13 at 11:20 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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These are the decisions made after the approval of the April 4, 2013 meeting minutes:

link comment answered Jul 30 '13 at 21:16 Michael R. Garcia New member
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The following decisions were motioned and seconded by the attendees at the April 4, 2013 meeting:

link comment answered Jul 31 '13 at 00:20 worldviewfilms New member

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