How may I re-word the following sentence: "After the meeting’s minute of April 4, 2013 was motioned and seconded by the attendees, the following decisions took place:"
To get rid of the passive voice, you must have the people doing the motioning, seconding, and deciding as the subject of the sentence.
The attendees of the meeting motioned and seconded the minutes of the April 4, 2013, meeting and made the following decisions:
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