Is the sentence correct in the Business format?
This is a challenging half-year for me, as my role and responsibility has been significantly changed.
I would offer a critique on your choice of tense as well:
"This is a challenging half-year for me" is in the present tense describing a six-month period (most of which probably has not yet occurred). If you're describing the past six-month period, I would put this in past tense. "This has been..." If you're describing the current six-month period, I would suggest the future tense (because of what has not yet occurred). "This will be..."
That will simply make the sentence more accurate. To tighten it up at the end, I would offer the thought of removing the passive voice and rearranging slightly:
"...as my role and responsibilities have changed significantly."
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