Use of nouns
What is the correct way of writing this sentence?
See example:
The operating EEO office utilizes training, newsletters, and other media to update and inform the general workforce on EEO related matters and items of interest.
asked Feb 02 '12 at 17:18
Cathy D. Dewar
New member
Cathy D. Dewar
New member
2 answers 
The only change I might make - and it's quite minor - would be at the end: "...and on items of interest."
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answered Feb 03 '12 at 14:41
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