Use of nouns

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What is the correct way of writing this sentence?

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The operating EEO office utilizes training, newsletters, and other media to update and inform the general workforce on EEO related matters and items of interest.
asked Feb 02 '12 at 17:18 Cathy D. Dewar New member

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The only change I might make - and it's quite minor - would be at the end: "...and on items of interest."

link comment answered Feb 03 '12 at 14:41 Steven List Contributor
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I think it's fine just as it is.
link comment answered Feb 05 '12 at 14:22 Lindsey York Contributor

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