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The schema contain affect is often found in my culture when we meet a person, we take into consideration the persons traits, their tones, eye contact, body motions and how they relate to others are some factors my culture would look for when making decisions about a person's character.
asked Jan 26 '12 at 23:47 Cynthia Kelley New member

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You have some problems with runaway sentences, or whatever they're called. I would say, "The schema-contain affect is often found in my culture when we meet people. We take into consideration peoples' traits, their tones, eye contact, body motions and how they relate to others. These are some factors my culture would look for when making decisions about a person's character."

link comment answered Feb 02 '12 at 22:52 Anna New member

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