Not sure how to correct this faulty paralleslism

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As a result, for the past four years I have created and utilized differentiated instruction material to address students’ individual needs and learning styles.

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As a result, for the past four years I have created and utilized differentiated instruction material to address students' individual needs and learning styles.
asked Jul 23 '13 at 03:43 Lolita New member

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I don't see faulty any parallelism in this sentence. As for the "differentiated" -- to me it's OK since, I believe, the case is about differentiated instruction in class.

link comment answered Jul 24 '13 at 03:47 Elin Tomov Contributor
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The only problem I see is the misuse of the word 'differentiated'. Replace it with 'different' and see if that makes a difference.

link comment answered Jul 23 '13 at 12:27 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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