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This policy applies to all staff, contractors, consultants and third parties who have been granted access to administer Synergy's information systems, Within the context of this policy, 'information systems' includes all Synergy owned or managed computing assets such as laptops, desktops, servers and Ipad.
asked Dec 28 '11 at 01:44 CARY916 New member

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This is two sentences.  The comma before "Within" should be a period.  The last word should be "iPads".  The name of the item has a small i and capital P, and it should be plural since the rest of the items in the list are plural. 

link comment answered Dec 28 '11 at 03:46 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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