How can I re-write this sentence, please?

If there were ever a good time, it is now when Maxy can become the ...

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If there was ever a good time, it is now when Maxy can become the brand of choice among P consumers.

asked Dec 16 '11 at 20:16

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Make the sentence simpler. "Now is the best time for Maxy to become the name brand among P consumers."

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answered Dec 17 '11 at 07:15

I'll suggest that it is a given that something is the brand of choice among consumers and that point can be implied rather than stated.

If there ever was a good time to market Maxy as the brand of choice, it is now.

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answered Dec 18 '11 at 00:48

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