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Today social media work hand in hand with the ability to mobilize citizens in fact merely the ratification movement in Facebook or Twitter is not enough and the challenge is to put shoes in the streets, while protesters in Tunisia or Egypt is well known .
asked Dec 14 '11 at 06:56 ali New member

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Today social media work hand in hand with the ability to mobilize citizens; in fact, merely the ratification movement on Facebook or Twitter is not enough. The challenge is to go to the streets and protest like the Tunisians and Egyptians.

link comment answered Dec 14 '11 at 07:28 Rino Pedro New member

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