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The perception of music in students' reality will act as one of the investigative devices in this study to reveal the influence music has had in students' lives.
asked Dec 11 '11 at 20:14 Janet Bell New member

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In this study, the perception of music in students' reality will act as one of the investigative devices used to reveal what influence music has had in students' lives.

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