Review this sentence for adjective and adverb use.

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The adjective "double" is describing the verb "experiencing". Consider changing the adjective to an adverb.

I do not see it this way, what I see is double to triple is describing the mortality rate. Am I incorrect?

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This is due to smokers experiencing double to triple the mortality rate of non-smokers .
asked Dec 03 '11 at 21:21 Cindy Carrigan New member

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Could this work for you?

This is due to the mortality rate of smokers being double to triple that of non-smokers.

link comment answered Dec 04 '11 at 21:25 Jody M. Expert

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