Review this sentence for adjective and adverb use.

The adjective "double" is describing the verb "experiencing". Consider changing the adjective to an adverb.

I do not see it this way, what I see is double to triple is describing the mortality rate. Am I incorrect?

See example:

This is due to smokers experiencing double to triple the mortality rate of non-smokers .

asked Dec 03 '11 at 21:21

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This is due to the mortality rate of smokers being double to triple that of non-smokers.

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answered Dec 04 '11 at 21:25

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