What is passive voice, how to correct the sentence?
With this new education system, several major educational changes were made, which emphasis more on developing the student's character.
Here is a simple explanation of passive voice from the Grammarly Handbook: http://www.grammarly.com/handbook/organization-and-development/text-level-measurements-adequate-writing/3/passive-voice/
For your sentence, the subject is educational changes, but the actor is the educational system. Try this:
The new education system made several major educational changes that emphasize development of student character.
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