Run-on sentences

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I have a problem with run-on sentences in the following example: “In the company of all the obsessions available within the business global perspective, you need to make sure that you're running items accurate so the business is running well and profitable.”

asked Mar 31 '11 at 02:52 Randy Dixon New member

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Randy,

 

“In the company of all the obsessions available within the business global perspective, you need to make sure that you're running items accurately (adverb needed) so that (signals another complete idea ) the business runs (wrong verb tense) well and profitably (adverb needed).”

 

I hope this helps.

 

Kim

link comment answered Mar 31 '11 at 13:13 Kimberly Expert

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