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the percentage of wastage of the products was high as the distributors were themselves using them almost about 50-60 percent of total volume.

asked Nov 18 '11 at 06:59 Shobhit New member

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First, your title description doesn't make sense.

As regards your text, I'll ask you this question: what were the distributors using?

Try rewriting it, and I'll help.

link comment answered Nov 18 '11 at 08:42 A Clil To Climb Contributor

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