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My most precious memories involved travelling to different churches and fellowshipping with them, also our annual convocations was the summer highlight. The church has grown from strength to strength on different levels. In the past we had prayer breakfasts once a month where ministers would meet with us to pray and we had many great discussions.

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In the past we had prayer breakfasts once a month where ministers would meet with us to pray and we had many great discussions.
asked Nov 17 '11 at 10:22 fiona francis New member

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My most precious memories involved traveling to different churches and building fellowship with the congregation. The annual convocation was the highlight of the summer. 

 

Our church has grown from strength to strength on different levels. In the past, the church conducted monthly prayer breakfasts, during which ministers would meet with the group to pray and engaged us in many great discussions.

link comment answered Nov 17 '11 at 15:37 Shaila Fernandes Expert

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