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Help, not sure how to write this sentence.

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Four days after the fire happened two arson detectives arrived on the scene.
asked Nov 17 '11 at 05:29 Nicole New member

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I think it's ok although I personally would say: Four days after the fire happened, two detectives from the arson unit (or department) arrived on the scene.

link comment answered Nov 17 '11 at 09:20 A Clil To Climb Contributor
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It took four days after the fire occurred, for two arson detectives to arrive on the scene.

link answered Nov 17 '11 at 15:43 Shaila Fernandes Expert

If you do it that way, Shaila, you cannot have a comma, and you also change the meaning. The original sentence is neutral - it merely states a fact. In your sentence, it suggests that the detectives should have arrived earlier. A Clil To ClimbNov 17 '11 at 21:07

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