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This is my name idea, but it is wordy and overdeveloped how can I tie the concepts together to create a maid idea to go with a striong introduction
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Clearly, the pros and cons of creating a comprehensive boundary on the number of years an influential and powerful American leader can stay in office has not been established, and this dichotomy leads to numerous questions about the necessity of term limit policies.
asked Nov 15 '11 at 18:28
D Gerrard
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D Gerrard
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Clearly, the pros and cons of creating a comprehensive boundary based on the term limits of American leaders has not been established; this dichotomy leads to numerous questions about the necessity of term limit reform.
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answered Nov 18 '11 at 15:50
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