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how could I almost for get, Amelia started receiving straight A's.

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Oh and I almost forgot she started getting straight A's, and became a better student in school.
asked Nov 10 '11 at 02:53 Atlasi New member

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Oh, I almost forgot!  She became a better student in school and started getting straight A's. 

 

I would make it into two sentences to add a bit of emphasis.  You don't have to, but you need some punctuation after "oh" and after "forgot."  I personally would switch the order of getting straight A's & being a better student, as usually one first becomes a better student and then the good grades follow. 

link comment answered Nov 10 '11 at 21:11 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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