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A divorce or breakup threatens their sense of control and that is when then violence escalates.
asked Nov 08 '11 at 21:36 gerri New member

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Violence is more likely to escalate during a divorce or breakup because a person's judgment is negatively affected by this kind of stress.

 

Could that work?

link comment edited Nov 08 '11 at 22:29 Scott Martin Contributor

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