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mistakes made by using to many words, or by repeating words or ideas. how could i correct this sentences

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There are high rates that show evidence of domestic violence among young women in relationships does not see early warning signs of abusive issues.
asked Nov 06 '11 at 19:55 gerri New member

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There are statistics that show that, of young women in relationships, many do not see early warning signs of domestic abuse.

link comment answered Nov 07 '11 at 16:31 Kimberly Expert

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