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Summary I am working for large companies producing GRP pipes in Egypt then recently in UAE. I am responsible for Maintenance Department and also IT in Charge ,In fact, I manage team of professional people to achieve the maintenance works by better way One of my responsibilities is to design and modify the electrical control circuits and Network for Both equipments (installed & new Fabricated) to improve the machines' performance and decrease the time down I deal with many people at different departments in the company with much flexibility to execute works quickly; At last, I look forward to have a managing position because I have ability to manage both works and people safely.

asked Nov 02 '11 at 05:27 mohamed New member

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If your parents think today's fashions are weird

link comment answered Aug 22 '12 at 18:00 Thipphonesay INTHAVONGSA New member
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they should see the clothes people wore in the Middle Ages

link comment answered Aug 22 '12 at 18:02 Thipphonesay INTHAVONGSA New member
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liked clothes that were half one color and half another

link comment answered Aug 22 '12 at 18:03 Thipphonesay INTHAVONGSA New member
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Mohamed, 

 

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link comment answered Nov 03 '11 at 16:35 Kimberly Expert

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