comma usage
need more commas?
See example:
Through this dramatic end Great-grandfather could fetch no physician, as he was completely passed out on the floor of the kitchen.
asked Nov 02 '11 at 03:39
salem
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salem
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1 answer 
You need a comma after 'end' and to remove the comma before 'as'.
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answered Nov 03 '11 at 16:26
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