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Miss Maria Dix
94 Alexandra Court
30th November 2011
Re: Application for the Administrative Assistant/Secretary.
Please accept my application for your successful company in West London of matching skills, as I have customer care skills, working as care worker.
I have excellent customer services experience with an attentive and listening approach to customer care. The role consisted of accurate diary recording on a day to day basis to status patient care. I had to escort the patient to the practice, keeping an organised and efficient diary system, to respond to patient symtoms, with an independent approach to the patient’s current state of health.
I have three years of administration experience combined with my receptionist experience of I.T. computing. (I.T. certificate obtained at college). I possess knowledge of word and can produce documents such as (eg spreadsheets, word documents, memos & faxes. I once worked for a computer company and had to assist in typing documents for the secretary, to meet deadline work.
I enjoy working in a busy environment with effective transferable caring experience, to develop within the role to deal with correspondence, with a hard working, reliable approach to my work.
I have a friendly and professional telephone manner to create a warm and presentable working environment to any organisation.
I welcome the opportunity to meet with you and discuss the role in more detail.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Miss Maria Dix
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