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Her strong religious beliefs have also played a vital role in why I admire her because any and every problem that may come her way she will leave it in God's hands and trust Him to take care of it for her so that she does not have to stress out about it.
asked Oct 30 '11 at 20:45 gerald New member

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Her strong religious beliefs are a pivotal reason for why I admire her. She leaves every problem she faces in God's hands, and trusts Him to take care of it for her, so she does not seem to ever stress out about anything.

link comment answered Oct 31 '11 at 00:30 Shaila Fernandes Expert

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