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Please advice on the use of comma. Thanks

See example:

We pray that after this day of formation on the sacred liturgy, Christ inflames the hearts with His presence to preserve sacred liturgy within our Chapel and Christian life.
asked Oct 30 '11 at 18:31 Maria Grant New member

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Hi Maria

 

I would punctuate this sentnece as follows:

 

We pray that, after this day of formation on the sacred liturgy, Christ fills our /all hearts with His presence to preserve the sacred liturgy within our Chapel and Christian life.

 

I have also made a couple of suggested changes to the text.  However, as I am not a religious person, I may have changed the meaning inadvertently.  The comma at the beginning, however, is correct.

link answered Oct 31 '11 at 01:25 Agreeonpurpose Contributor

Thank you! It was helpful! Maria GrantOct 31 '11 at 18:06

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